Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument.
- Computers are being used more and more in education people say that this is a positive trend opponent argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument 56
- Computers are being used more and more in education people say that this is a positive trend opponent argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument 61
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument 95
- Computers are being used more and more in education people say that this is a positive trend opponent argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument 56
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument 56
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this day and age, coming along with t...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to analyse' or 'analyse'.
Suggestion: to analyse; analyse
...on. For instance, Microsoft Excel helps analysing the big amount of data in an efficient ...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... helps analysing the big amount of data in an efficient manner and Power Point offers chance to presen...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to store' or 'store'.
Suggestion: to store; store
...tc. Moreover, this technical tool helps storing the past infromation in the digital for...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is learning will become more difficult. In conclusion, the draw back of comput...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than it is becoming a negative trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38655462185 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84895019176 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663865546218 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3916582727 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28990654639 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970681469742 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701878187625 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170968977461 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107108131957 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In this day and age, coming along with t...
^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to analyse' or 'analyse'.
Suggestion: to analyse; analyse
...on. For instance, Microsoft Excel helps analysing the big amount of data in an efficient ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... helps analysing the big amount of data in an efficient manner and Power Point offers chance to presen...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to store' or 'store'.
Suggestion: to store; store
...tc. Moreover, this technical tool helps storing the past infromation in the digital for...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is learning will become more difficult. In conclusion, the draw back of comput...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than it is becoming a negative trend.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38655462185 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84895019176 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663865546218 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3916582727 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28990654639 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970681469742 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701878187625 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170968977461 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107108131957 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.