Percentage of people going to the cinema in a European country on different days
The bar charts illustrates the proportion of movie-goers in a European country on different days in 3 years: 2003, 2005 and 2007.
Overall, while the percentage of people visiting the cinema on Wednesday witnessed a downward trend, the figures for other days saw no significant changes over the years. In addition, people in this country went to the cinema the most on weekends.
In 2003, the percentage of people going to the cinema on Monday was 10%, a third of that on Sunday. While Saturday witnessed the highest proportion of movie-goers (40%).Whereas, the figures for these 3 days increased by roughly 5% in 2005, the final year saw a marginal declined 3% in all 3 figures. Meanwhile, the figure for Friday remained stable at 30% after 4 years.
Starting at 15% in 2003, the percentage of cinema on Tuesday, higher than that on Thursday by 3%, in 2003, after which both figures saw a drop of 2%. In the final year, while the figure for Tuesday increased slightly to 19%, that for Thursday rose considerably by 5%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...day was 10%, a third of that on Sunday. While Saturday witnessed the highest proporti...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...e highest proportion of movie-goers 40%.Whereas, the figures for these 3 days increased...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76836158192 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71480537327 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7745062807 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30786969228 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135681696352 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109430862833 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188180584044 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868358676071 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.