Environment and natural habitat play an important role in our ecological system. In today's world there is a big necessity of environment conservation. In order to tackle this problem, governments of many nations are implementing rules and policies which will help in preservation of environment and natural habitat. A majority of these policies are being imposed on industrial organizations as they vastly contribute for exploitation of environment. The policies that focus on protecting environment should be imposed on each and every industry even if they generate profit and boost nation's economy.
There are many multinational organizations who have their factories set up in different parts of the globe. Their contribution to boost the economy of these countries happens on a large scale. But, the boost in economy would not be of any use if the organizations exploit environment harshly. Hence, environment protection policies should be imposed on multinational organizations as well.
"Bhopal Gas Tragedy" which happened in the year 2006 lead to death of many people due to emission of harmful gases in environment near the chemical factory. Also, the white colour of Taj Mahal which was once considered as one of the 7 wonders of the world, has started to fade away because of smoke emission from factories around it. So, the progress made by these factories is not of any use if our environment and sculptures are affected by them.
Many wood-based industries need wood as a major raw material on a large scale. They are cutting down trees which has eventually led to rapid deforestation. Hence, animals and birds are endangered which forces them to enter urban areas and eventually a threat to all of the citizens. If these industries discover an alternative to wood, they will not only save trees but also will lead to an exciting scientific discovery. This alternative will change the overall dynamics of wood-based industries.
Therefore, policies that focus on protecting environment should be imposed upon multinational organizations even if they generate profit and boost overall economy of the nation as they do cause damage to the environment. This will not only help in conservation of environment, but also will drive these organizations to search for an alternative to majority of raw matrials which they need for production.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30319148936 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15067429747 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9183983819 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.947368421 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15789473684 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459180465501 0.243740707755 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149428956698 0.0831039109588 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200021532663 0.0758088955206 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272521953889 0.150359130593 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188206428426 0.0667264976115 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.