International travel and tourism has become easier and more affordable. Is this a positive or a negative development?
With the advancement of technology, the world is becoming increasingly interconnected day by day. As a result, international travels and tourism is now more accessible and affordable than ever. In my opinion, this is a positive development for two key reasons.
To begin, tourism has been the greatest source of revenue for some of the countries which are naturally blessed with beautiful landscapes and scenarios. Moreover, people by nature is a curious being. So, with the availability of cheap overseas flights, people can explore the world more and learn about the cultures of foreign countries. Their vacations are not limited to their own countries anymore. On the other hand, countries which depend largely on its tourism revenues such as Sri Lanka, India etc. are also benefitting from such increased tourisms.
Furthermore, due to the increasing convenience of international travel, countries do not have to depend on their national reserves and resources anymore. For example, a developed country in need of more labor forces can bring in skilled people from another country without much difficulty. In addition, students from underdeveloped countries wanting to pursue higher studies in fields that are not being offered in their own countries, can conveniently travel abroad to fulfill their dreams of studying the subject of their interest. So, affordable international travel has made it easier for students or workers to travel to foreign countries to explore the opportunities suitable for their personal growth.
In conclusion, because of easier and affordable foreign travel, tourism is now a huge revenue sector for the world and people can quench their thirst for exploring the world at an affordable rate as well. Convenient overseas travel has also opened new opportunities for students and workforces abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44561403509 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98258823237 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5427362988 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.466666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25326809278 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831763361261 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865588805533 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177464477248 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108742784332 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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