The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences, and only government action can solve the problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe only the authorities perform as crucial role that can counter the housing crisis in metropolitan areas. I personally agree with this statement to some extent which I will elucidate in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, it might appear that some communities who live in outlying district can take a part to overcome this problem. Simply, if certain well-educated and rich people is to live in the suburbs rather than bigger cities, they will establish an innovation of their home city, prompting more developed economic growth. To illustrate by cooperating between governments and regional business people, developed cities, such as Hong Kong, relocate the townhouse, business and commercial district to coastal area to ease the overcrowding downtown and provide more lush green areas. In addition, each individual should have more valued themselves in terms of sharpening soft and hard skill. By this, it means that one can find tremendous job opportunity such as remote work, and thus, earning prosperous life in their hometown.
On the other hand, enacting the system of restricting urban growth seems to be a good strategy to combat this. If the restrictive migration policies were implemented, social health and job opportunities would widely be open for city dwellers. Furthermore, the amount of building tax and land rent with higher cost can withdraw rural society to occupy metropolitan centres. Such revenue can be allocated to build the equity of public infrastructures or job vacancies, especially in suburb area. Thus, those who live in town and countryside rarely relocate themselves to venture into over-crowded cities, only to achieve a better living.
It seems to me that, the government systems resolving the housing crisis in megalopolis brings greater measurements. Those include the new policy of restricting migration and raising the house prices. This is as long as the individual keeps up in skilful and creative outcome for their own future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36075949367 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90518738876 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642405063291 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3282792609 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135361790183 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426255297747 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366420909923 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840453987522 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337212408147 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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