Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this to let you know that we have been doing music practise in your community hall on Tuesday and Friday. However, due to some circumstances, we have been told that we cannot use that hall from nowonwards.
First of all, I would like to let you know that we are bunch of people who loves music deeply. Every single person from our group is excellent in playing different kinds of musical instruments such as piano, violin, sexophone and so on. Moreover, on every saturday we play free music concerts in the Rose theater for general public. For that purpose, we require optimum practise and that is why we are using your hall.
Apperently, music is seen as such a therapueatic approach for any sort of worries. It relaxes your mind and allows you to declutter yourself from any tensions or worries. Furthermore, we are doing all this on saturdays so that people can leave any stress behind and enjoy their weekends. Definitely, it is a great sourse of entertainment for the community.
Let me give you some suggesions. Is it possible to practise on some another day and time in your hall? For us, any day woulld be perfect but evening time is preffered as we all are working in the mornings.
Thank you for your consideration.
yours faithfully,
Jay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... music concerts in the Rose theater for general public. For that purpose, we require optimum p...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...gs. Thank you for your consideration. yours faithfully, Jay
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your consideration. yours faithfully, Jay
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, sort of, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68381891167 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595555555556 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8279306031 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222773449645 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769392200874 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665677876107 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139062474156 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741550860442 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.