Any individual’s lifestyle is modified by numerous factors. Some people believe that diversions in climate has greatest impacts on people’s way of living, while others advocates that economy of that particular area is responsible. This essay will discuss both the sides of arguments.
To begin with, people are experiencing climate change in diverse ways. These can affect our health, ability to grow food, housing, safety and work. Some of us are already more vulnerable to climate impacts, such as people living in small nations and developing countries. Moreover, even in the tropical countries where people are used to of living in fix seasonal patterns are now facing weather uncertainty frequently. These can lead to alterations in eating habits, working conditions and so on. Conditions like sea level rise and saltwater intrusion have advanced to the point where whole communities have to relocate, and protracted droughts are putting people at the risk of famine. In the future, number of “climate refugees” is expected to rise.
Discussing the latter view, economic developments results in higher levels of education, greater employment opportunities, and higher income levels. These works to create better jobs that lead to an increased standard of living for people, and to improve the infrastructure of the community where they live. If an individual is earning sufficient money, better standard of living is likely to be adapted. Besides this, less stressful work life, healthy mental status and decrease work pressure are another perks of good economy. On the downward side, an economic recession generally leads to an increased cost of living.
To conclude, human life has impacts not only from climate changes but also from economy of any region. However, in my opinion, alternations in climate have greater effects than economy in people’s way of living
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the greatest'.
Suggestion: has the greatest
...ople believe that diversions in climate has greatest impacts on people’s way of living, whil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40338983051 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81564962172 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2435492048 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2795151174 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075988303421 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101125272211 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186044380546 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118117162754 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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