Experts say if old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day will be healthier and happier.
However many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness.
Discuss the cause and solution
While many old people are endure by feeling left behind and deficiency of healthiness. The causes of this appear to be focused on two areas, and some point of solution also arise to be possible.
Perhaps the major factor here is the relationship with their children are no longer exist in direct contact as long as they get older. For instance, after the children graduate from their academic studies, they continuing search for jobs followed by making their own families. Indirectly, this pattern of build new bonds can lead them to take off their attention to their parents that has been replaced with a new family. Many families start to move and choose to live in a different place from their parents, indeed. Another cause was the physical condition of elderly itself. Furthermore, the strength of their body which is increasingly vulnerable that force them from not doing many things that can cause to their health. According to this, they just rest with doing nothing that cause them to feel loneliness.
Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be to keep maintaining the relationship in direct contact in certain. Although their son or daughter are busy in their work that make it difficult to meet them in person, they also can have conversations by distance. A second remedy might be to live in the same place or house with their parents. If this is happening, it can lead them to make the good bonds with their descendants. Finally, they can spend their leisure time without feeling lonely, even just lying down in the bed because of the body condition can not be changed.
In summary, the factors of relationship and condition of the old people’s bodies appear to be the main cause. A coordinated response by the descendants especially their families may well lessen the severity of the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'endured'.
Suggestion: endured
While many old people are endure by feeling left behind and deficiency o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91612903226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60727390415 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7395813775 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134723399998 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526864292389 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331215632612 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947049932048 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035687116771 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.