Experts say if old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day will be healthier and happier.
However many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness.
Discuss the cause and solution
Most likely people aged above 60s feel poorly lonely and their physical condition gradually worsen. A suggestion says that old society should socialize and move their body more to get fresher and fitter. The factors of this concern seem to derive from two issues, and several dealing methods appear to be feasible.
There will be two contributory factors which cause this problem. First, the emotional gap between family members. Recently the world has become busier, leading to the negligence of intrapersonal relationships. This might occur if an individual works in spite of much time spent and is totally not involved with the social work. Even though there is probably a common interaction between partners in the workplace, an emotional depthness is not available. The second cause is lacking time to focus on oneself well being. Despite all the positive gain in the when somebody puts a significant effort to pursue his/her career, the body that he/she carries out activity with can be forgotten due to the busy schedule.
Regarding potential solutions, the main remedy will be a special occasion that is attended and is agreed by the entire family. With the similar motivation of being responsible with the family demands, or remembering things their grandparents have inherited to support them, may strengthen the bond between grandparents and their grandchildren. Moreover, private time would appear to be needed especially in terms of healthcare. A simple example would range from consuming vitamins regularly to a brisk walk in the morning.
In conclusion, the strangeness between people in the family and the absence of leisure time to maintain body health are assumed to be the problem. However, an intended event, as well as any moment for the health care are advisable to prevent that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23024054983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74165217141 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8222616608 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165255374952 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480518529071 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366017660076 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894765939623 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194586507646 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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