Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Jay Thomas and I am currently pursuing Diploma Civil engineering course from your University. I am writing this letter to let you know that I am looking for a student with whom I can share my flat. This extra income will be much more helpful to me as our semester fees are about to rise.
Let me explain you more in detail. My building is only 10 minutes away from our collage so it will be convenient for any student to stay over there. Someone can either walk or take a bus to commute. Also, some amazing restaurants are there nearby, so nobody has to worry if they donot know cooking.
I have 2 large bedrooms with a private kitchen in my apartment. Each room is very spacious and well equipped with furniture. Moreover, there are large windows, individual computer setup and personal washroom facilities available. In addition to this, free WI Fi connection is also there which can help us to do study without interruptions.
I am eagerly searching for a partner to share my place as soon as possible. Please help me to find someone.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jay Thomas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...re my place as soon as possible. Please help me to find someone. Thank you for your considerat...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r your consideration. Yours faithfully, Jay Thomas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67661691542 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69175838972 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681592039801 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2018633001 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117267822185 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405910795202 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046826639053 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661529932145 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582911674697 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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