Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
In the most countries the crime rate tends to be increasing among people, mainly between younger ones. The causes of this appear to be focused on two areas, and number of remedies also appear to be possible.
Perhaps the major factor here is the rising the living cost in some countries because of human and natural disastrous phenomena such as war, earthquakes and flooding; if it comes with the increasing of unemployment, especially for younger people, probably some kind of crimes such as rubbery will be grown. For instance, many reports are published about people who had trouble providing their costs as their motivation to start rubbery. Another cause is increasing of violence into society because of different type of environmental factors and routines events. In fact, community mental health will be affected by irritated parameters such as pollution, noises, and hot weather that will appear in the form of aggressive behavior.
Turning to the possible solutions, an obvious step would be the improvement of life conditions and welfare level of individuals by the government. It might be achievable by allocating subsidies to poor people, providing the appropriate jobs for young people and decreasing of life costs in possible ways like reduction of taxes. A second remedy might be through the schools and giving required education to the pupils for having sophisticated manner in the future. If the student learn the rules and respect the other's right, they will tend to have proper behavior in their life too.
In conclusion, the factors of economic and increasing violence level appear to be the main cause. Perhaps the main remedies are improving the society's welfare and teaching the right manners to young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18149466192 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71793410811 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1409179587 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274613952404 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951134000636 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722451574118 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170930026523 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854935474486 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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