In this modern era, traditional events and celebrations in some regions of the world are on the brink of extinction. The two main reasons contributed to this phenomenon are the massive modernization and social problem such as rejection by religious leaders. This essay will briefly explain that two main factors and the possible solution to mitigate the issue.
Recently, we are facing the rapid technological development era that make people easier in getting any information providing a huge impact on how they see their way of life. In consequence, they will tend to adapt new way of thinking and somehow novel method in living their life including leaving their traditional habit in celebrate any events. For instance, cooking and providing Tumpeng (a yellow rice) for neighbours to celebrate birthday in traditional javanese culture now has being changed with singing and slicing birthday cake for family and friends. Tumpeng for some people is considered as out of date dish for celebrating birthday. Additionally, the other factor that make people lost of interest in celebrating traditional festivals is because of its contradictory with any religious values. A representative case is the vanishing of traditional dance called "Kuda-kepang". During the dance, the dancers should follow traditional ceremony to call spirit souls for entering their bodies. This dance is used to use to rejecting evil, preventing any disasters and praying for the fertility of the lands. However, in the modern religious era, the dance is considered as satanic ceremonial that against religious value.
To cope with this problem, the government and related parties like cultural practitioners could initiates a big campaign and education to prevent traditional events disappearing. For example, the governments could use social media and influencers to promote traditional dishes and festivals. It has happened in East Java Indonesia, that the local government organize Tumpeng cooking competition in celebration of Indonesia independence day. The event successfully made Tumpeng gaining popularity again among people. Moreover, regarding controversial dance clashing religious value, the government and cultural practitioners could retouching the dance or the process of any traditional festivals so that it has no contradictory with any religious values and can be used as entertainment.
In conclusion, the loss of traditional events is either caused by modernization and social rejection. However, the government and cultural activists could take real action through community campaign on social media and remaking sensitive parts of the traditional festivals in order to make it acceptable for any religion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'initiate'
Suggestion: initiate
...rties like cultural practitioners could initiates a big campaign and education to prevent...
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Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'retouch'
Suggestion: retouch
...rnment and cultural practitioners could retouching the dance or the process of any traditi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66421568627 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22998580413 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6456923102 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.631578947 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180834955317 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598856429759 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488236252107 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124722722335 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340477166781 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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