Nowadays, amount of populations who buy house is raise every day. People from some countries prefer buying their apartment than rent it. This trend has some advantages and disadvantages and I think that buying your own house better.
One foremost reason of this preference is that people do not want give money for someone every month, instead they think that it is better to buy it and live in your own house. First pros is that, they can do with their apartment anything and no one can say anything. It is possible to reconstruct it and do it for their preferences. For example, if they buy a house with three rooms, they can do it as five and if they do not like the design, then they have opportunity to do it in their own style. Another advantage, is that they can save this house for their children. In the future they would not pay for apartment and will not have hardships.
At the same time, renting has a lot of drawbacks. Every months people need to send a lot of money and for someone it can be very hard to do it, because some people can have little salary. Another reason is a deposit. For example, in country like America people in advance have to pay a money for deposit and it can be tough for young generation, but they can take a mortgage and buy house with their parents helps or with programmes for young people. It gives opportunities to have a house with discount, which is good for them.
To conlude, two away have their positive and negatives sites. Buying house can is a good for people who do not feel comfortable in another people's house and they can save for their children and reniting could have some problems for young people. I assume that, buying house has a lot of positive than negative sties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...e America people in advance have to pay a money for deposit and it can be tough for you...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...e and negatives sites. Buying house can is a good for people who do not feel comfo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 5.60731707317 785% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 318.0 196.424390244 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4748427673 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36189481778 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449685534591 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1031746961 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7058823529 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244742910576 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931280925166 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600897687706 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169581639533 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107894342027 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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