Đề bài: Some people believe that school children should be given homework by their teachers. Do you agree or disagree?
There is an outgoing debate about the importance of homework. Some people argue that homework should be assigned to students every day, while others are of the opposite view. From my perspective, I totally agree with the former view for the following reasons.
In the first place, there is no denying that homework plays such a vital role in helping students acquiring knowledge. To delve dipper into this view, it can be clearly seen that doing homework is a good way to review the knowledge obtained by students during class. Also, when doing assignments, students need to apply learned knowledge to solve the problem. There is a widespread belief that doing homework occupied all of the students’ time, and they may not have enough time for rest or to spend with families and friends. In some case, students might have to burn the midnight oil to complete the task given. Such argument seems to have some merit on the surface. However, when examined carefully, it turns out to be quite short-sighted. While it is true that this task could take a large amount of time, the view given is undoubtful because students can finish the homework easily if they manage their time efficiently and fully concentrate on the task. Moreover, that doing schoolwork could help students develop skills such as discipline, concentration, time management skill. These skills would be very necessary for students in the future.
In conclusion, it is my firm belief that schools and teachers should give school task to their students every single day. This can be well explained by the fact that doing homework helps children obtain and understand knowledge and develop important skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03597122302 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58104993102 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.87604874 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255844320093 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815825747046 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552145288847 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196114529287 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490451466092 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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