Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media platform. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is widely believed that newspaper is the greatest way which provides information for people while another opposite perspective is that everyone can get news via social media. Although reading newspaper is familiar with most of people, I highly recommend gaining information through media platform.
On the one hand, the way the people get news from newspaper is the most common one with everyone. In our modern lives, there is someone who do not how use technological tools for searching the information, so going down the street and buying a newspaper in a bookstore is more suitable with them. Moreover, the news which are printed in the newspaper is definitely official, which means that newspaper can bring reliable information, while the one in social media can not be checked if it precise or not.
Turning to the remaining view, according to the development of society, social media help people to get news quickly, nearly immediatly when the events occur, which in my view, media platform totally overweigh the printed newspaper. Getting information in mass media not only saves the time to produce newspapers but also be easily accessed to get and update the information. In addition, by using social applications, people do not have to pay money to get news. The information in the mass media is usually free for everyone, or we just need to pay a little money to read and flexiable to bring to everywhere.
To conclude, both newspaper and social platform have their benefits and drawbacks but it seems to me that social media is the most optimal way to get news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ough reading newspaper is familiar with most of people, I highly recommend gaining information...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96992481203 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72152409971 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537593984962 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0071105493 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349957986634 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153222511532 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814486042433 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235607984373 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373016646088 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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