Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Jay Thomas and I am living in Georgetown for last 5 years. I am writing this to let you know about shortage of sport provisions in my surrounding area especially for people of age around 30-40.
Let me explain you more in detail. First of all, there should be proper indoor sports complex where we can play any game irrespective of weather. Moreover, the timings should be flexible such as early morning and late night shifts as we all are working professionals. Apart from that, efficient running tracks around garden areas are essential to maintain our physique.
Discussing the reasons, as we all are from middle age groups and we find it extremely difficult to maintain good balance between working life and health, these kind of activities will boost our performances in each sector. They are quite beneficial for our health in long term.
Also, organizing some friendly matches by government authorities during summer days will be welcomed. We are eagerly looking for some positive response from officials.
Yours faithfully,
Jay Thomas
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...alance between working life and health, these kind of activities will boost our performanc...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, kind of, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12429378531 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70791850402 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728813559322 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6534862776 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141809807598 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534186190453 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564575347846 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689729160558 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504121709076 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...alance between working life and health, these kind of activities will boost our performanc...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, kind of, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12429378531 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70791850402 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728813559322 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6534862776 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141809807598 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534186190453 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564575347846 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689729160558 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504121709076 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.