Freshwater is a limited resource in certain regions of the world. Today, the escalating demand has transformed it into a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand? What measures can governments and individuals take to respond to the problem?
It is undeniable that some particular areas have a limited resource of freshwater globally and the increase request of water has turned into a universal issue. In this essay, I will mention the main reasons and the solution from governments that they may need.
First of all, water consumption and cultivating are the significant purposes for the limitation of freshwater. Humans need freshwater to drink because 70 percent of the human body is water. In addition, they have to drink at least 2 liters per day in order to consume enough water. Another reason is that farmers use water to pray plants or clean vegetables. Freshwater is an essential part of trees in that it absorbs water from roots and moves water around its body. Therefore, farmers have to use tonnes of water to plant trees daily.
According to the problem, it has some solutions for governments to apply into their areas. Importing water from other countries or using cutting-edge techniques are the two best solutions. Authorities can buy freshwater from nations with freshwater resources such as Brazil, Russia, United State of America, and Canada. However, this solution is quite impossible for some countries when they have to pay an enormous amount of money. Hence, the leadership should spend money on buying high-tech machines for transferring saltwater into freshwater.
In conclusion, the limited freshwater can be solved in many ways to deal with the demands of freshwater. Freshwater is a major part of human life that we need to find the greatest method for the global needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10505836576 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74913669679 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599221789883 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7061179292 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139114228697 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482432579253 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555515700762 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999720009641 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465687940989 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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