"Truly innovative ideas tend to come from individuals, because groups tend to work towards consensus and the status quo.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The brain is a very complex organ even not fully understood now. Hence one might think a combination of brains might make room for more innovation. However the reverse tends to be true rules like the 80/20 percent rule backs this claim. Furthermore history is on this side of the fence as scientist like Newton, Einstien and others have made major contributions to the development of humnaity than many groups have.
On major example that stands out to me because of my background is the innvoative and radical approach used by Kwame Nkrumah to help Ghana became the first sub-saharan country to gain independence from its colonial masters. Long before entering the scene people like Paa Grant, Obetsebi Lamptey among others were leading the charge to help Ghana, gain independence from British rule. However, their approach hinged on a cursory theme of "getting independence in the shortest possible time". A cause they have been championing for over a decade without much results. Upon Kwame Nkrumah's innovative approach of rallying Ghanaians, educating them on the benefits of independence and proponenting a theme that rather suggested "independence now" Ghana gained its independence in just two years. Another example that mainly shakes the foundations of engineering and space travel is the innovative idea brought to live by the individual Elon Musk. He challenge the status quo that was believed by many groups in this field of engineering. He built resuable spaceships that seemed impossible two to three decades ago, in the field of space travel and engineering. He challenged the boundaries many groups of engineers and researchers at top instituions like NASA embraced. His innovative idea has now slashed the cost of space travel by a whooping 50 percent or more, making the acheivement of many technological advancement plausible.
These two examples are testament that truly innovative ideas often tend to come from individuals, because groups have certain procedures to meet making innovations too costly for them to embrace.
However, one might counter saying the quick development of the COVID-19 vaccine in the wake of the pandemic is a major example of how groups can also quickly come up with smart ideas that benefits humanity. This might definitely be true but further research showed that the group of researched to develop the vaccine did so based of the hardwork and research of another scientist. The work of this scientist served as the major bearing to speed up the development process.
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| 2023-11-25 | Jhon Kwame | 66 | view |
| 2023-11-25 | Jhon Kwame | 66 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ex organ even not fully understood now. Hence one might think a combination of brains...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ns might make room for more innovation. However the reverse tends to be true rules like...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...he 80/20 percent rule backs this claim. Furthermore history is on this side of the fence as...
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Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n championing for over a decade without much results. Upon Kwame Nkrumahs innovative...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...independence in just two years. Another example that mainly shakes the f...
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Line 2, column 1074, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'challenges'.
Suggestion: challenges
...to live by the individual Elon Musk. He challenge the status quo that was believed by man...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... field of space travel and engineering. He challenged the boundaries many groups o...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advancement seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much technological advancement', 'a good deal of technological advancement'.
Suggestion: much technological advancement; a good deal of technological advancement
...cent or more, making the acheivement of many technological advancement plausible. These two examples are tes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2628992629 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90268194684 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589680589681 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4791551799 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132698060381 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394863854618 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480499385252 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967634491868 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686383450874 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.