In a modern era, fast food is the main priority for a large proportion of people for their meals. It has long been a subject of discussion whether consuming junk food has more merits than its drawbacks or not. In my opinion, dependent on ready-made food can bring about more obstacles for individuals as compared to any advantage that might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic advantages of consuming fast food for special meals. The first and the foremost is burgers, and fries for example are easy to access from any restaurant. Although eating such foods cause serious ailments among people, it saves time for all working individuals. Many people prefer to buy subway, breads for their lunch rather than cooking at home. Additionally, why people nowadays go for ready made meal as it is available all the time whether its morning, afternoon, or evening. For example, according to a recent survey done by Stanford University that about 60% population depend on already cooked food.
Nevertheless, despite the advantages discussed above, I believe if individuals inhale fast food, affects their health. People who eat fast food suffer from cardiovascular problems. Because of increasing cholesterol from the saturated oils used to cook restaurant food, increasing blood pressure is a main disease that may happen. In addition to this, purchasing junk food is more expensive rather than making at home. As a result, it may cause financial instability. Thus, moving towards junk food items is not a good option.
In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, the benefits of the given topic significantly outweigh the drawbacks. Lastly, in my opinion, it would be wise to say that while fast food is available 24 hours and good for balance personal and professional life, particularly for individuals who have hectic schedule, face health issues in their life and spent more money for their meals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16720257235 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76132972371 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9202769313 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34963044663 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106008202208 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777884509457 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223040545548 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416525858828 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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