Currently, we are dealing with more and more problems that affect the entire planet so good relationships between different countries are becoming more significant than ever before.I completely agree with the statement and this essay will explain my opinion.
First, in term of trade, having good relationships between different countries will be a favorable condition for that country's economy to develop.The exported and imported goods are increasing so the goods for domestic business are more diverse and there are more products for buyers to choose from.This is illustrate that previously, VietNam was a country facing an economic problem, mainly on the issue of trade because there are to many goods cannot be sold but now this problem has been solved because traders in VietNam have traded goods to other countries such as: China, Korea, Japan,...
In addition, in terms of medical, it will be easier to buy good medicines and vaccines.For example, VietNam and Cuba are 2 close countries. During the Covid-19 life, Cuba provided Viet Nam with a lot of vaccines to save people.This is the meaningful benefit of having good relationship between different countries.
In conclusion,have good relationships will solve economic problems between others countries and health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87087094799 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.292484241 49.4020404114 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.6 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387620284987 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205293075477 0.084324248473 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180093144372 0.0667982634062 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247078036731 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176933753437 0.056905535591 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.0946893788 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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