Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should the government give more financial support to local film industries?
It is true that people are showing increasing interest in seeing foreign films rather than domestic movies. I believe that such phenomenon stems from two main reasons,and local film industries can resort to various methods ,such as the government’s financial support.
Two main factors, from my point of view,are responsible for people’s willingness to watch foreign movies. Firstly, compared to locally produced film,some foreign movies special effects are more sophisticated and can make the audience feel more immersive,as a result,more and more people choose to consume for visual enjoyment.For instance,many Marvel movies have combined special effects with story lines to stimulate the audience's dopamine,yet many Chinese films are derided for cheap special effects.So viewers spend the same amount of time watching Marvel movies with more elaborate graphics.Secondly,Influenced by the cultural context, the plots of domestic films are predictable, but the plots of foreign films are more attractive to the audience.We cannot deny that many people go to the cinema just for the fun, So their first choice is, of course, foreign films.Additionally,Not to mention the huge gap between Chinese and Hollywood screenplays.Many scripts in Chinese films are dull and boring, so it's no wonder audiences shun them.
Faced with this situation, the government needs to give strong economic support to the development of domestic film industry.The financial subsidy means that domestic films will have more opportunities to hire well-known writers and post-production staff,so the overall texture of the film may be better and it will attract more and more audiences.However, in addition to economic measures, the government should also use cultural policies to promote the development of the domestic film industry.For example, training cultural talents to write wonderful stories in their own countries and strongly supporting the construction of film schools.Under the dual role of government policy and economic support,domestic films will get a huge boost.
In conclusion,People's preference for foreign films mainly springs from the differences between the special effects of movies and their plots,and several approaches used by government can be utilized to change the status quo.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76696165192 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45752664141 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 331.768326129 49.4020404114 672% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.833333333 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.5 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 7.06120827912 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.204214679497 0.084324248473 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689361031271 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258383347606 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577951939044 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.07 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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