The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Southwest Airport is undergoing a renovation procedure that will be finished next year. The blueprint for the reconstruction reveals that the airport will generally be considerably expanded with additional features and functions.

First of all, the departure building would be three times as big as the current site, according to the layout. Six departure gates would be located in each of three connected blocks for departure, bringing the total number of gates from eight to eighteen. Concurrently, a sky train line connecting the departure hall entrance and the junction of the three departure branches would be built to replace the current walkway. This might greatly benefit travellers and save time.

Turning to the departure and arrival areas, the existing airport simply has a check-in counter and a cafe; there are no services available in the arrivals hall. Following the renovation, the two halls would include ATMs, car-rental services, bag-dropping services, and a second cafe. Travelers may find it more convenient to navigate the airport hands-free with the new bag-dropping service. New stores would also be added along the way to the exit gates so that customers may shop there before departing.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
... there are no services available in the arrivals hall. Following the renovation, the two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, second, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40314136126 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84584714534 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6755260095 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0688287734164 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326407012991 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480280824305 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628192821487 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647422383858 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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