The two maps below show road access to city hospital; in 2007 and in 2010.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate road access related to a city hospital change considerably in its form in 2007 and in 2010.
It is obvious that, the city hospital in 2010 expanded bus station in the western side that allow more space and accessibility to Hospital Rd. The ring road has two entire gage in 2010.
As can be seen, the size of the city hospital has not changed in 2007 and in 2010, while add two roundabout in entire and end of hospital Rd which has to bus station located next to it. The bus stops has two availability to the north and the south of Hospital Rd which in the south has a junction by city road. A public car park located close to the city hospital that has own entry in the east of ring road in 2010. Another entry is for staff car park. These two staff car park and public car park separated with each own entry in 2010. By 2010 there were six bus stop that demolished.
As a result, the new city hospital has more facilities with better road accessibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gage' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'gages'.
Suggestion: gages
...spital Rd. The ring road has two entire gage in 2010. As can be seen, the size of ...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stops'.
Suggestion: stops
...try in 2010. By 2010 there were six bus stop that demolished. As a result, the new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29032258065 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32173421454 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478494623656 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5111909036 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278766728168 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13309494446 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903641302171 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209093952908 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723174321938 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.