A large number of deaths are caused by road accidents. Why do so many road accidents occur? Make recommendations that would help to reduce the number of road accidents.
It is true that road accidents are among the major causes of mortality all over the world. Several factors are responsible for this worrying trend, and some steps by the government and individuals can be taken to save people from being victims.
There are several factors responsible for this rise in road accidents. Firstly, it is the pathetic and dilapidated condition of motorways which leads to various accidents that result in serious injuries. Also, sometimes natural conditions like fog and snow make the roads slippery, which further enhances the number of casualties. Secondly, inadequate vehicle maintenance plays a part in this scenario; like in most developing countries, people generally do not care about the safety measures and standards required for driving a vehicle and generally tend to ignore the maintenance of defective breaks and broken lights, which results in increasing probability of accidents. Finally, driver's unwilling attitude to follow rules and regulations and even the use of alcohol and mobile phones while driving lead to a number of road collisions.
These road accidents can be lessened by certain measures. The first and foremost solution is to increase awareness among the public regarding this alarming issue by organizing certain workshops and campaigns by means of which they can help the people and guide them about traffic rules, which will certainly limit the figures related to these incidents. Moreover, laws should be enforced by the authorities for reckless driving, and proper speed limits should be fixed, and heavy penalties must be imposed on persons who breach them. Also, the installation of surveillance cameras on highways and roundabouts, which would ensure vigil on culprits, can be a fruitful solution for mitigating this issue. Last but not least, the government need to develop infrastructure too by widening the roads and by making road signs, subways and flyovers in accordance with the up-to-date demands which would enable the smooth movement of vehicles.
In conclusion, the irresponsible behaviour of government and individuals is the root cause of these road disasters; this catastrophe can be avoided by taking a few steps by both sides.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-01-08 | minhnhat230602 | 89 | view |
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 84
- People eat more processed food than they did in the past Why is this What are the effects of this 73
- A large number of deaths are caused by road accidents Why do so many road accidents occur Make recommendations that would help to reduce the number of road accidents 89
- Topic In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 73
- People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience Do you think public speaking skills are really important Should students be taught public speaking at school 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39193083573 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83132374047 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590778097983 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8473395495 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.923076923 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216268453827 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923252800135 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795337047844 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128429584234 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317042137658 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.