Electric vehicles are far less damaging to the environment when compared to gasoline cars. This is why governments all around the world should promote the manufacturing and use of electric cars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Environmental issues have always aroused sharp debates among concerned people who worry about ecological future of their country. Proceeding from this, an opinion exists that global authorities should support the production of electric cars due to the reason that e-cars cause less damage than gasoline cars. Although I believe that the maintenance of the electric vehicle is cheaper for the owner, regular cars are not demanding for special external conditions for exploitation.
On the one hand, electric cars allow the driver to save significant amount of money as they employ the electric power for fuel instead of petrol. Besides that, the replacement of consumables and oil in electric vehicles is required not as often as in petroleum cars. Taken together, this characteristics render electric automobile beneficial for funds preserving and impact positively on the family budget. For instance, according to Russian statistics one full tank of petroleum is ten times as expensive as one full charge of e-car battery. Thus, possession of electric vehicle is obviously more profitable than the ownership of regular car due to cheaper associated costs.
On the other hand, some countries acquire harsh climate and economical conditions which might create obstacles in using electro cars. Permanent low temperatures affect badly on battery life duration slowing the charging process and reducing its efficiency. In addition, many governments are not able to provide accessible recharging stations since electricity remains costly source in many states. For example, only 800 e-cars are registered in Russian Siberia on the grounds that climate there is extremely cold and charging stations are very rare. Hence, gasoline cars remain demanded in the regions with particular weather and economical circumstances.
To conclude, even though low maintenance costs attract people to buy electric cars, those who live in special climate and economical conditions drive petrol cars since their exploitation is simple and convenient. I believe that worldwide authorities should support the producing of e-cars as this they create less damage to the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62691131498 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84214530511 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7626775696 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290298513542 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949676402142 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685556292794 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179034086775 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574508500892 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.