Nowadays in many countries, people are following the latest fashion, hairstyles and so on. Why are they so influenced by fashion? Is it a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Over the years, people have been debating about huge influence of fashion industry in our life’s. As a rule society is subject to the latest trends in fashion. Im my opinion people can follow the latest trends because they want to be the center of attention and this is acceptable.
First of all, we are all subject to the trends of the modern world in one way or another. fashion plays a role of self-expression in our life and without it some of us can not keep up with the times. For example, my friend prefers to buy fashion magazines and use them to meet the latest trends in music, interior design and lifestyle. Hence, the coming trends are so diverse for every taste and color that everyone is sure to find something up to themselves.
Secondly, it seems obvious to me that there is nothing wrong with grasping the new trends of the season. Also a good person needs to constantly improve and create their own multi-faceted image to be successful in their social circle. For instance, a young and successful businessman Evgeny Chichvarkin is exposed to fashion trends and setting a good example for young people in self-care. Thus, fashion mainly has a positive impact on the surrounding reality and brings diversity to the world of gray colors.
All in all, modern fashion allows us all to be interesting to each other, and the trends that it brings allow us to monitor our body and spirit. However, everyone decides for themselves whether to follow this path or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72692307692 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57144941055 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5542120105 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178813802048 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638965040794 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404111722833 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108592001582 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387449282689 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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