In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?
In some countries, people tend to think about possessing their own house rather than renting one. In this essay, i will explore the reasons behind this preference and discuss the negative effects of it.
There are several reasons why people might prefer home-ownership. Firstly, having a home means that people don’t have to pay monthly rental fee, which they can save up for another purposes in the future, such as starting a small business or fulfil their wish-list . Secondly, home-ownership provides the sense of freedom. Homeowners have the freedom to modify their homes to suit their tastes and needs, which isn’t always possible when renting. Furthermore, in some countries, home-ownership is a key means of growing wealth, which can be passed down through generations.
Despite these reasons, buying a home can lead to several negative outcomes. It can lead to financial risk if property values decrease or if homeowners struggle with mortgage payments. This financial instability can lead to stress and anxiety for homeowners. Furthermore, home-ownership can exacerbate wealth inequality if only certain segments of the population can afford to own homes, leading to societal divisions. In addition to the financial risks, having a fixed place of residence can also lead to decreased mobility. Homeowners may find it difficult to relocate for job opportunities or personal reasons.
In conclusion, the importance of home-ownership varies greatly depending on cultural, economic, and personal factors. While it can provide financial security and a sense of community, it also carries potential financial risks and can be the issue of traveling. Therefore, it is essential to consider these aspects when discussing the benefits and drawbacks of home-ownership.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53676470588 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0694877895 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9215725574 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211083985814 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733261676224 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696710602876 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145026251531 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103551141694 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.