The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Culture can be difined as the norms, behavior or activities of the certain group of people in a particular territory or region. Contemporary culture implies prevails culture for the certain time. Every country, society have cherished beliefs, action of doing, that are widely recognized as culture. Cultur can be assessed by the people of living in this particular society like child, young, adult etc. The above argument provides contemporary culture can be studied by analyze their young. I mostly disagree with this term with two reasons.
First of all, a society consist of a certain group of people.They are all representative of the society. If we want to study the culture of this society, we need to follow all of the parts of this society like children, young and adult. This study help this to conclude an effective decisoin regarding the culture. For illustrate, during the time of covid, the younger are less affected than adult. If any organization want to analysis the trend of covid affectiveness by the study only young, it would give them a fallacious information. So finding out the exact contemporary culture should evaluate all the stakeholders of the society.
Moreover, If the young are proportionatly maximuma amount, at this time should also consider all under the study. For example, in many developing countries in the world, the ratio of young are stongly more than to adult or others like Bangladesh, India etc. The society of this countries highly dominated by young. But the are not full representative of the socity. If you want to conclude anything you should assess all the level of people.
However, the young are fancifull regarding culture and this can be a shadow of their trends.The young are passioniate about cloths, hair style, and using mobile phones and automoible. At this case they are getter higher valued than others but this are not the enough for identidying contemporary culture.
In conclusion, all levels of people have minimum amount of influence on culture. So understnad the contemporary culture using young trend is not fair at all.But young are most effective and passioniate about culture. So assessing contemporary culture, all levels of peoples culture should be evaluated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17032967033 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81976287542 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497252747253 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0530502712 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150419814201 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517925896075 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064975597806 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093500161338 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661416720791 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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