Globalization has been taking place for hundreds of years but has sped up enormously over the last half-century. Opponents of globalization, however, hold that it leads to countries becoming culturally assimilated. Write an essay ( about 350 words) to express your opinion.
Concerning the rapid acceleration of the worldwide integration process, pessimists opine that this phenomenon is contributory to cultural homogenization. I am of the viewpoint that its merits surpass any associated detriments.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that the loss of cultural diversity may stem from globalization. As it has boosted reciprocal exchange between nations, some cultures may either reshape or intertwine, forming a uniform culture. Besides, many indigenous communities are under the influence of dominant cultures, for instance, the Western culture. Individuals who belong to a minority culture may internalize the values and norms of the dominant one in hopes of gaining access to its privileges. In other words, minority identity development may involve attempts to assimilate by changing one’s appearance, mannerisms, or even name, in order to fit in. Hence, homogenization is unavoidable.
However, I maintain that the opportunities accompanying globalization outweigh the challenges. To commence, thanks to the proliferation of social media platforms, people are constantly exposed to various societies, which helps them immerse themselves in the diverse lifestyles of alien communities. This kind of integration fosters higher awareness and tolerance of other norms, significantly broadening one’s horizon. Furthermore, globalization caters for international alliances such as the WHO and IMF, which all aim for the world’s welfare in every domain. Due to the increasing exchange and collaboration among countries, these foundations’ goal is to co-produce and share resources, services, information, and support. Ultimately, such synergy stimulates economic growth and interdependence, acting as a catalyst for societal progression.
As all considered, while the endangerment of national distinctiveness may underlie cultural exchange, my perspective is that globalization is synonymous with advancements that yield benefits on a global scale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that yield benefits on a global scale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13214285714 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57442552827 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1141952462 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.466666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101213343088 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292830323601 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321016154059 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590734847634 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307998350385 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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