Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that huge companies and industries should relocate to regional areas, while others believe that urban areas are more beneficial. This essay agrees that urban cities may offer amenities and facilities. The essay will firstly, discuss the advantages of moving to regional areas and secondly, will illustrate the disadvantages of relocating to urban areas.
There are Some potential advantages I will elaborate as follows. Firstly, Lower Operating Costs: Real estate, labours, and other costs are often lower in regional areas compared to major urban centres. Moreover, this could lead to reduced overhead for large companies. Secondly, Environmental Impact: Reduced congestion in major cities could have positive environmental impacts in terms of air quality, noise pollution, and resource usage. furthermore, Community Investment: The influx of large companies and industry could spur economic development and investment in regional communities, potentially creating jobs and improving local infrastructure.
On the other hand, some potential disadvantages could be: Firstly, Access to Suppliers or Customers: Companies may lose some of the advantages of being in close to key suppliers, customers, and other industry players if they move to regional areas. Secondly, Lack of Amenities: Regional areas may not offer the same level of amenities, entertainment, and lifestyle options that are available in large cities, which could make it more difficult to attract and retain employees. Last, Infrastructure Limitations: Regional areas may lack the robust
transportation, telecommunications, and other critical infrastructure that is often more developed in major urban centres.
In conclusion, the decision to relocate to a regional area would depend heavily on the specific needs and priorities of the company, as well as the characteristics of the place and location will move for. In my opinion, would be wise for the companies to conduct feasibility studies and pilot programs before committing to a major relocation. But in the right circumstances, with thoughtful planning and execution, the disadvantages of a regional move could very well outweigh the advantages for large companies and industries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Transportation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77811550152 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22320326282 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.332052865 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.785714286 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324917693937 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112687499387 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639170225847 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171132423365 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810940257642 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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