Some people say that young people should be encouraged to leave home when they become adults while others claim it is better if they remain with their family.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Several individuals are inclined to the perspective that the young generation who reach adulthood, should get motivation to leave their home, whilst others show a preference with a contrasting statement of living with their parents. My point of view is inclined to the former opinion because I reckon that young people should experience the societal spheres independently without their parent’s assistance.
Living away from parents is always an encouragement to make the young become mature physically and mentally. Admittedly, life’s independence occasionally assists them in altering several familial behaviors and attitudes. For instance, various American early adults were preferable to consuming fast food in the bygone duration of living with their families. After that, they changed their diets considerably because of their desire for a fascinating appearance and body, besides, their thought about health are probably improved.
On the other hand, others favor remaining with their parents because several facilities and services’ costs including renting houses, paying taxes involved, and cost of living can be eliminated. These potential costs might be invested in other significance such as education or gym exercises. To illustrate, by cutting off the renting house fees, the young generation can decrease the burden of monetizing for living. They can concentrate on studying to get professional certificates and go to the gym instead which also imparts to the modification of physical and cognitive maturity.
To sum up, my personal perception is suitable for the opinion that young people should live independently to experience life without their parents. Meanwhile, several people are still steady with the perspective of living with their families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, while, for instance, i reckon, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73863636364 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96478170454 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8053475526 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279534672755 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946005279324 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507574367415 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170443275642 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449505381712 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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