The table and pie chart gives information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas
The given pie graph illustrates the percentage of different people from distinctive nations that constitute the Australian population, while the table illustrates the density of people with different nationalities in urban area and the outskirts.
Overall, the native citizens account for the largest portion of the total population, as opposed to people from Netherland. It is also noticeable that most people have a preference to live in cities instead of the suburbs.
Concerning the proportion of people with various nationalities, the percentage of native citizens account for 73% of the total population. For the figure for people form other regions residing in Australia, it makes up 14% of the total population which is double the figure for British in Australia. Meanwhile the proportion of New Zealander, Chinese and Dutch living in Australia, constitutes 3%, 2% and 1% of the total correspondingly.
From the table it can be seen that Chinese account for the largest proportion with the figure being recorded at 99%. In the second position, it is New Zealander with 90% of city dweller, followed by British and Dutch with the figure being recorded at 89% and 83% of people living in city respectively Similarly, 80% of Australian resides in urban area.
- It is important for everyone including young people to save money for their future To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or negative development 84
- The process describes three methods of recruiting new employees at particular company 89
- The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, similarly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28078817734 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01873593225 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507389162562 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3467075381 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124956797696 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522765610513 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702091443095 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835064302577 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843933407802 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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