The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram demonstrates the prevalence of renowned people on Instagram including Cristiano Ronaldo, The Rock, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena Gomez between 2018 and 2021.
Overview, the figure for all influencers rose significantly in the period of 3 years. Additionally, Selena Gomez was the most prevalent person among 5 celebrities, which was then taken place by Cristiano Ronaldo.
In 2018, Selena Gomez was the most influential person who had the greatest number of followers with the figure being recorded at about 130 million, followed by Cristiano Ronaldo and Ariana Grande with a similar figure (120) which was lower than Selena Gomez’s followers below approximately 10 million. The Rock and Kylie Jenner was less influential than others who had the least number of followers on social media application (Instagram) with the respective figures being at about 90 million and 100 million.
In the next 3 years, Cristiano Ronaldo’s followers soared sharply to roughly 310 million and became the most influential celebrity on Instagram. Similarly, The Rock, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner witnessed an approximately double increase in number of followers to the same figure in 2021 (250 million). Notably, the influence Selena Gomez also grew to roughly 249 million; however, its figure was the least compared to its counterparts.
- In many countries children are becoming overweight and unhealthy Some people think that this is the responsibility of governments to solve the problem To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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- The diagram details the process of producing olive oil Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015 78
- It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be What are the causes What can be done to improve the situation 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44285714286 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82555956371 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0234329991 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.875 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0327358016422 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0179572558334 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0171236722718 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0251054979712 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186158404535 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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