It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a say ‘without risk you cannot promote neither in your private life nor in professional life’. According to some if a person wants to extend his/her life extremely change should do risk. In my opinion, this challenge has more advantage than for people who want to change their lives.
On the one hand, there are lots of reasons that people don’t do risk in their lives. Although they know this way can improve their quality of lives don’t have any tendency to do that. Because most of them fear about the routes and obstacles ahead. For instance, for a person who doesn’t much money and any financial support never choose a work such as vehicles deal because it needs a huge investment and you have at least ten years an experience in it. Hence, there are not lots of people who get risks and become a successful person in their personal lives. Getting risk is a double-edged sword if you failure in your risk loss everything that you have but if you win you can have anything.
On the other hand, at work and in your career always you want to get risk in any aspects of your work. This makes you get promote and improve your skills. For example, when the employer suggest an awesome work opportunity that you don’t have any information and experience about and you have doubt accept or not. In such situations if you are a timid person never accept because you always stay behind your fear and don’t get progress in your professional life. Some else who accepted have this chance to show themselves to their boss and employer if so they might promote in their job which is grateful for them. Thus, gets risk is so important and have long stand effect on your professional life.
In conclusion, some people does not like to get risk anymore and they want to continue their boring daily lives. Not only do getting risk is necessary in both private and professional life because enhance your quality and reveal your abilities but also, you have become an knowledgeable person who has lots of experience and can consult to other people who want to choose this way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lity and reveal your abilities but also, you have become an knowledgeable person ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ur abilities but also, you have become an knowledgeable person who has lots of ex...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her people who want to choose this way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63342318059 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37127225778 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469002695418 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1571354851 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.117647059 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303789713687 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11566492482 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576414338592 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214216098034 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494817099628 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.