People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
These days, people who are not sleeping enough are constantly tightening compared to the past. This essay will first discuss the main causes of this problem and then describe Bearings that it would be.
In my opinion, the dominant reasons in absence of sleeping hours in plain words is distractions. To clarify, today more and more people prefer using their phones instead of sleeping, especially adolescents, because it provides an escape for them. For example, the proportion of people who chat after midnight has shown an upward trend from 15% to 58% in the last 10 years. Furthermore, there are unmonitored distractions that are hazardous to anyone, such as stress or breakdowns, because when a person comes of age, they will be liable to their families or even to their jobs.
The possible effects of this problem include loss of productivity and mental health problems. Firstly, people’s demeanor will be volatile and going to have a lot of flounders because lack of sleep is orient resolution to people’s behavior so it’s striking to anyone as a mirror to them, they will be more resentful or even discontented. In addition, it will be detrimental for institutions to have employees who are not sleeping well. For example, if someone goes to work without enough sleep, it will affect their task performance and could cause plague for their manager for demerit works.
In conclusion, it is essential for everyone to get enough sleep for their mental health and productive continuity. For example, the curtailed amount of sleep is between 6 to 8 hours. This is enough to be conducive and have an enhancement to their task progression
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02189781022 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78157742981 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9128234107 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156961059694 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612031145386 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405556021386 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104651439517 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333155121405 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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