Scientific research is said to be conducted and mananged by the authorities rather than private enterprises. From my perspective, I totally concur with this statements on account of the benefits it brings to the society.
Governments’ interference is one of the factors that affects the successful rate and guarantee of a scientific study. Firstly, research performed by the authorities is under the supervision of many experts and professors, so it is followed strictly in order to get the best result. Moreover, statistics and data collected from the study will be revealed officially, which brings citizens a great sense of belief. Secondly, controlling an experiment requires a lot of time and efforts, especially international co-operation, and personal corporations are struggle to do this. For example, during the Covid-19 pandemic, various nations, namely America and China, produced the vaccines against the epidemic and exported those to other countries; As a result, the spread of Covid-19 has been hindered significantly.
The outright control of the government over a study also plays a vital role in preventing the overuse of research on unlawful purposes. To be more specific, some individuals following the terrorism may take advantage of researching proccess and use the weapons they have to murder or hurt the innoccent citizens. Moreover, some private companies have conducts unethical research on animals in order to produce different products for people to use, but they have not contemplated carefully enough to realize that biological system of human is different from animals. As a result, there are some circumstances that users are allergic to the products.
In conclusion, I believe that it should be the governments’ responsible to undertake a study since it brings higher successful rate and alleviate the situation of using research for inhuman actions. Besides that, private companies can cooperate and assist the authorities to achieve the best outcome.
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults Which view do you agree with Use examples to support your position 73
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 61
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 78
- Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should spend 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53267973856 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1469909521 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5469492931 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.230769231 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232007883534 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745417323794 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756067405629 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139513151803 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371669190268 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.