Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea that conventional newspaper will overcome Internet news to become the most critical source of news is controversial. In my opinion, although newspaper have important roles with some readers, I totally disagree with this opinion.
On the one hand, in this digital age, information is a symbol of power. As a matter of fact, the more up-to-minute information of companies have, the more advantages they gain over their rivals. Therefore, Internet should be prioritized over traditional newspaper for their speed and convenience. In addition, contemporary devices are becoming more affordable for consumers. In fact, we can easily come across a 3-year-old childs or oldsters using smartphone. For that reason, news via Internet is the primary choice for the government if there are any urgent circumstances. The COVID 19 pandermic is a clear example to exemplify the role of news speed. During this isolation time with the limited transportation are allowed, the inhabitants can not go out to buy any necessities such as food and clothes, let alone newspaper. The goverment at that dificult time, mainly use the Interner to contact to the residents.
On the other hand, traditional newspaper has some issues that must be taken into consideration. The first problem is the expensive and complicated newpaper production process. Compared to the single typing text action to export news in Internet, newspaper has too many steps to reach the comsumers. Moreover, the cost can be even higher for distribution to rural areas. Second, with the rising awereness about environmental problems in population, more and more complain about cutting tree for paper in some companies. To gain the trust of customers, they should change their production processes.
In conclusion, due to the convenience and availability of Internet news, I believe the Internet will become a major soure of information access.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ence and availability of Internet news, I believe the Internet will become a majo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37333333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05613408665 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9256176775 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279482610373 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727622296836 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826957218558 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181497956254 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736907345955 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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