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the graph provides information about the amount of money spent on different five forms of entertainments over a five-period year in three continents. in general, it is obvious from the data given that, the amount of money spent on different kinds of hobbies in United State had highest level in both 1995 and 2000 with 184 and 257 billions respectively rather than other continents.
moreover, publishing and television were two main entertainments which were spent more money on. in the Europe the amount of money was spent on these entertainments increased by 34 billions from 1995 to 2000 while in Asia there was a significant increase from 67 to 110 billions over a five-year period. it can not be overlooked that in all three continents fun money for television and publishing had highest level while cinema and video had lowest level. furthermore, the proportion of money was spent in music was increased for both Asia and United state over a five year period while the proportion of these in Europe was stable even after five years.
in conclusion, in united state people preferred to spend more money on different kinds of hobbies rather than other countries and there was a significant gap between fun money in united state and other continents in 2000.
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