Do you think it’s necessary to have a mentor or role model to be happy or successful?
Everyone has a distinct goal in his life. That goal which gives a mean to people life vary from one person to another. Achieving aim make people happier or more successful. As you see, in despite of diversity in people’s aim, they cause success or happiness. Some people believe that for being success they should model themselves on a success person and having a mentor guarantee their success and happiness. On the other hand others disagree and believe that imitate from a role model may not result as success as they are. Author of this reading believe that, although inspired from a brilliant mentor is not requisite for gain a significant success but it could be useful and encourage people to exploit whole their ability.
People who exalt a hero try to make himself similar to that mentor. Although it will be tedious but if it comes with patient, gradually accumulate some mentor’s characteristic. For instance, in childhood, parents are mentor of many children and they emulate behavior of them. As a result in adolescent, the veins of parents’ behavior are detectable in treat style of children. If parents as a role model show a considered behavior it will be useful for forming characteristic of the youth. So, copying proper mentors’ behavior will bring success for both individual youth and society.
Suppose that society’s member choose a proper mentor although it will not insure success or happiness of people. Using role model’s life as successful pattern for achieving success and happiness, only help to distinguish obstacle in the life and teach how people should face with hardships and overcome them. Further though shows that using mentor life as a guide only is an auxiliary mean for gain a goal and no one could be success only with that. However young mind will flourish with proper mentor, but it is not a magic tool that missing that be equal to failure.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262247838617 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.14409221902 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0893371757925 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0345821325648 0.046263068375 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0518731988473 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146974063401 0.118717715034 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0317002881844 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62859686608 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201729106628 0.0309702414327 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0835734870317 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.028818443804 0.0209618222197 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00864553314121 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1903.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 320.0 408.028673835 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.946875 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371875 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278125 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171875 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109375 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62859686608 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528125 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 54.9520789505 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8235294118 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4540459881 48.84282405 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.644075263715 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 46.6360294118 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.9125 1.45489161554 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211158409905 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.171686030772 0.103427244359 166% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102386814831 0.0752933317313 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.443837339874 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131216414607 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832146205561 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546341089426 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.297493849262 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0094466952106 0.067059652881 14% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162112644566 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160858574098 0.0618886996521 26% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
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Rates: 85 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 25 Out of 30