The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
The bar chart demonstrates how the different levels of post-school qualifications of Australian people who held them compared regarding to gender in 1999.
In view of male, it had the lowest percentage in having Undergraduate Diploma, while the highest point could be seen in holding Skilled Vocational Diploma (Nearly 35% and 90%, respectively). Also, the percentage of Postgraduate Diploma was approximately over twice as high as Undergraduate Diploma. Additionally, the percentages of Bachelor's and Masters degrees accounted for 45% and 60%, respectively.
On the other hand, Skilled Vocational Diploma stood last in the percentage of women. Whereas Undergraduate Diploma had the highest rate, Bachelor's Degree ranked after it with 50%. Besides, Postgraduate Diploma and Master Degree figured with 30% and 40%, respectively.
Overall, the proportion of male who held post-school qualifications outstripped that of female in three kinds of qualifications. Also, males outnumbered females in high level of education among five categories compared in the chart.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.321428571429 0.268076937826 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.107142857143 0.116061578633 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0561224489796 0.0759168565197 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510204081633 0.0366838410393 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.015306122449 0.0131127313244 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137755102041 0.155750635184 88% => OK
Participles: 0.030612244898 0.0379272487307 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.46706642443 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00510204081633 0.0210936926555 24% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0561224489796 0.0948980150116 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00510204081633 0.00437022459523 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015306122449 0.00967000014798 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1079.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.9 80% => OK
Chars per words: 6.82911392405 5.90752243213 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424050632911 0.337110787985 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335443037975 0.247514529752 136% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23417721519 0.171178102325 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.196202531646 0.112407865282 175% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46706642443 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.546246751206 117% => OK
Word variations: 59.7722799636 49.3433353143 121% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5555555556 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4002743473 42.9750493124 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.888888889 135.714022679 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.689975730869 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.099859353 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.82352941176 2.94281807926 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565545816835 0.418131533498 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.087186308456 0.181151798455 48% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0571720273214 0.0850326197045 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.649774142104 0.706616315825 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159705626459 0.157042692854 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25455502241 0.228904883108 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14588178196 0.108899403657 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.262136204496 0.367819155151 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.144749731703 0.0812612215331 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388080359129 0.316326947829 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11231864583 0.0921553760075 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9