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In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
I firmly disagree with the claim that in twenty years time, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. On the contrary, the usage of cars would have been doubled in a time span of twenty years from now. Cars are being highly regarded all over the world and their use has never seen a considerable decline in the past and will never do so in the future too. There are many possible reasons due to which cars will become more popular in the near future.
First of all, cars are easy forms of transporting people from one place to another. When people are asked...
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Sentence: When people are asked to used public transport system like buses and share autos, they rarely do so, because of the inconvenience caused.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and used
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No. of Words: 620 350
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Score: 29 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 35 15
No. of Words: 620 350
No. of Characters: 2782 1500
No. of Different Words: 295 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.99 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.487 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.513 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 166 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.205 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.263 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.449 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5