A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The 21st century is the time where people don't have time for others, when they take care of personal business and matters. In this world full of complexities and disregard, it is important to stay on the ground and to adhere to the morality.
A lot of us would say, that nowadays people couldn't find true values as in the times before. Everything is the matter of material possession, abundance and connections. If you don't have money, you can forget about travelling, going out with mates and enjoying luxurious experiences. On the other hand, those who come from the rich families can afford little pleasures like eating the specific food or driving an expensive car.
The material status is, however, very important but we should not forget on traditional values from the past. How many people have died by sacrificing lives to save some values as the country, honour, dignity or family? Today, the examples of individuals who are willing to leave some things on behalf of the honour or respect are rare, On the contrary, everyone looks his own interest and doesn't care about other people feelings. The kindness and trust are forgotten and many people create a large distance from their own origin and roots.
It might seem disheartening to have such a life, without any positive outlook or need for happiness. In addition, many of us consider the present situation as dangerous and want to change something. However, the public doesn't take any action to eradicate this rude habit of indifference and cruelty.
At last, it must be said that honour still exists on the planet as well as in the surrounding worldwide. All that we need is to find it and not let it go for nothing on the planet.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238532110092 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.152905198777 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0948012232416 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0244648318043 0.0501214627716 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0428134556575 0.0437548338989 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122324159021 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0275229357798 0.0403226058552 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55608793727 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275229357798 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.00305810397554 0.00163938923432 187% => OK
Determiners: 0.0978593272171 0.0861772015684 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183486238532 0.021408717616 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183486238532 0.011925033212 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1706.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80272108844 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336734693878 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221088435374 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170068027211 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102040816327 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55608793727 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 68.6435285079 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7289223154 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 41.7088435374 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.76388888889 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222309990557 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0806139292958 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0618609979404 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562172940452 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123837764292 0.148594505496 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986329780989 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535060759365 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269182281558 0.324371583561 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0528112447278 0.0638462369009 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148614054372 0.228012699653 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421461917547 0.058150111329 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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