some government say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way.
It goes without saying that population control is one of the most important issues facing by many of the countries around the world today.Many people claim that birth rate control through numerous policy is necessary and right for a government. I strongly believe in the statement of controlling population for the better economy and environment reasons. The consequences and solutions for the mentioned problem of population can be elaborated as follows.
It is worth considering the issue of increasing rate of population of country on priority by any government. The increase in birth rate would result in high population density and low per capita income. It would create scarcity of resources available and lead to think the government about creating more resources to satisfy basic needs such as food, shelter, education, employment etc.
Furthermore, the increase in population will affect the environment adversely. For the increasing population , more food and shelter will be required which can increase logging of forests. Increase city boundaries can increase the pollution and amount of effluents in order to damage the environment in many ways.
What is more,It is the duty of the government of any country to keep eye on birth rate and population development. so, It is good to decide by them the number of children should carry by a couple to limit the birth rate. The government can draft numerous policy and incentives to motivate people in restricting family size. Say for instance, the government can declare relaxation of certain amount in IT, they can offer additional benefits on their expenditures if valid documents of family size has been produce to avail the benefits. The families can be recognized on particular day for limiting their family size in the interest of nation and so on.
All in all, combination of policy , proper awareness and benefits associated with having fewer kids can help the government to balance the economy and environment. It is one of the crucial step required to be taken by the concerned government.
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Increase city boundaries can increase the pollution
The increase in city boundaries can increase the pollution
Increasing city boundaries can increase the pollution
if valid documents of family size has been produce to avail the benefits.
if valid documents of family size have been produced to avail the benefits.
It is one of the crucial step
It is one of the crucial steps
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9.0
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 335 350
No. of Characters: 1692 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.278 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.051 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.837 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.802 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.608 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...on. All in all, combination of policy , proper awareness and benefits associate...
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'for instance', 'such as', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.293628808864 0.247107183377 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.146814404432 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0831024930748 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.016620498615 0.0501214627716 33% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0304709141274 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152354570637 0.122226691241 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0498614958449 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91482105414 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277008310249 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0941828254848 0.0861772015684 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0360110803324 0.021408717616 168% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00554016620499 0.011925033212 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2069.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17611940299 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388059701493 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307462686567 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244776119403 0.203846283523 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173134328358 0.137316102897 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91482105414 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534328358209 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 56.7934894396 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9375 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1627555503 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.3125 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.814263465372 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.6837686567 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.55714285714 1.69124875643 151% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503445645802 0.332605444948 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127895660993 0.102741220458 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0711793470437 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.633306387355 0.534860350844 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0965384576388 0.148594505496 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216394153762 0.134430193775 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502236830154 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389404657208 0.324371583561 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0525437421521 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323754475 0.228012699653 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706920930198 0.058150111329 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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