"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
In this argument they discussed about effect of skateboarding on shoppers of central plaza in last two years.Because of skateboarders shoppers of central plaza faced many problems and also it decrease the business of shoppers of central plaza.
Firstly all the shoppers of central plaza believed that this sudden inclination in their business is just because of skateboarders. They blamed that this sudden decreasing in their business is because of increasing in the business skateboarders.
secondly shoppers of central plaza claimed that there is dramatic increase in amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Because of the increasing in skateboarders there are littering will take place and also vandalism took place which is the main disadvantage of skateboarders over the central plaza.And because of vandalism many antisocial activities happened which dissemble people.
Apart from this all disadvantages many new business techniques were came on that days and which is very much useful to all the businessman on that era. but shoppers of central plaza criticize the skateboarders for their all new ideas and it seem wrong.
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Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...pers of central plaza in last two years.Because of skateboarders shoppers of central pl...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...l plaza faced many problems and also it decrease the business of shoppers of central pla...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...sing in the business skateboarders. secondly shoppers of central plaza claimed that ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... vandalism throughout the plaza. Because of the increasing in skateboarders there...
^^
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...of skateboarders over the central plaza.And because of vandalism many antisocial ac...
^^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...tages many new business techniques were came on that days and which is very much use...
^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ful to all the businessman on that era. but shoppers of central plaza criticize the...
^^^
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...boarders for their all new ideas and it seem wrong.
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'apart from']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255434782609 0.25644967241 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.130434782609 0.15541462614 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0836205057962 149% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0326086956522 0.0520304965353 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0380434782609 0.0272364105082 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.201086956522 0.125424944231 160% => OK
Participles: 0.0217391304348 0.0416121511921 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06382467014 2.79052419416 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0054347826087 0.026700313972 20% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0923913043478 0.113004496875 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0054347826087 0.0255425247493 21% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0163043478261 0.0127820249294 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1149.0 2731.13054187 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 446.07635468 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.49152542373 6.12365571057 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.57801047555 80% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395480225989 0.378187486979 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.338983050847 0.287650121315 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25988700565 0.208842608468 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152542372881 0.135150697306 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06382467014 2.79052419416 110% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 207.018472906 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485875706215 0.469332199767 104% => OK
Word variations: 39.6507002108 52.1807786196 76% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.039408867 35% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 25.2857142857 23.2022227129 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3807646084 57.7814097925 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.142857143 141.986410481 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 23.2022227129 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.724660767414 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.1840193705 51.9672348444 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.37837837838 1.8405768891 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493759663592 0.441005458295 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.274013408539 0.135418324435 202% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.144115780347 0.0829849096947 174% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.813736561849 0.58762219726 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129931639 0.147661913831 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.303801488662 0.193483328276 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854459919784 0.0970749176394 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364264442925 0.42659136922 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.078791773636 0.0774707102158 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355964754375 0.312017818177 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699751246944 0.0698173142475 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...pers of central plaza in last two years.Because of skateboarders shoppers of central pl...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...l plaza faced many problems and also it decrease the business of shoppers of central pla...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...sing in the business skateboarders. secondly shoppers of central plaza claimed that ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... vandalism throughout the plaza. Because of the increasing in skateboarders there...
^^
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...of skateboarders over the central plaza.And because of vandalism many antisocial ac...
^^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...tages many new business techniques were came on that days and which is very much use...
^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ful to all the businessman on that era. but shoppers of central plaza criticize the...
^^^
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...boarders for their all new ideas and it seem wrong.
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'apart from']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255434782609 0.25644967241 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.130434782609 0.15541462614 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0836205057962 149% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0326086956522 0.0520304965353 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0380434782609 0.0272364105082 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.201086956522 0.125424944231 160% => OK
Participles: 0.0217391304348 0.0416121511921 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06382467014 2.79052419416 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0054347826087 0.026700313972 20% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0923913043478 0.113004496875 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0054347826087 0.0255425247493 21% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0163043478261 0.0127820249294 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1149.0 2731.13054187 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 446.07635468 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.49152542373 6.12365571057 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.57801047555 80% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395480225989 0.378187486979 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.338983050847 0.287650121315 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25988700565 0.208842608468 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152542372881 0.135150697306 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06382467014 2.79052419416 110% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 207.018472906 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485875706215 0.469332199767 104% => OK
Word variations: 39.6507002108 52.1807786196 76% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.039408867 35% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 25.2857142857 23.2022227129 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3807646084 57.7814097925 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.142857143 141.986410481 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 23.2022227129 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.724660767414 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.1840193705 51.9672348444 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.37837837838 1.8405768891 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493759663592 0.441005458295 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.274013408539 0.135418324435 202% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.144115780347 0.0829849096947 174% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.813736561849 0.58762219726 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129931639 0.147661913831 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.303801488662 0.193483328276 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854459919784 0.0970749176394 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364264442925 0.42659136922 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.078791773636 0.0774707102158 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355964754375 0.312017818177 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699751246944 0.0698173142475 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.