It is important to keep our old friends than to make new friends. Discuss about this topic by providing various examples.
Some people believe that it is important to keep our old friends than to make new friends while others believe the vice versa. But according to me both making new friends and keeping our old friends is important. I will provide various reasons to support my argument in this essay.
Making new friends is important in certain aspects. Consider for instance that a boy has shifted from one country to another for education. This means that there is a large change in culture, lifestyle and even time zones. If the boy is busy keeping contact with his old friends, he may not make good friends in his new place. This will have an adverse effect on him. He may not have any one to share his feelings in the new country. Even though he could contact his old friends, due the difference in time zones this may not be possible. In such a case, the boy may start feeling depressed. Secondly when we are busy keeping our old friends then that may lead to us being alienated from the group. We may be perceived as introvert and this may have many consequences. The people around may stop interacting with such a person. Such a person may have great difficulties adjusting to the new place because he/she cannot find people who could provide him/her a helping hand. It is important that we make new friends as we move forward in our life because by doing so we can easily get accustomed to the new place. We need friends who can help us to settle around. We also need to make new friends because by doing so we can share our problems with him/her. We need people whom we can physically meet and share our feelings.
However, this doesn't mean that we don't keep our old friends. We should see that we keep our old friends too. By keeping old friends we create a network of friends. This is very helpful for us. For example, consider the boy in the previous example. If he only makes new friends and neglects the old ones, then once he goes back he won't have anyone to enjoy. He will lose the connection with his old friends because they may feel that he has neglected them during his stay abroad. This will affect the boy because even though he wants to relish his old memories of school he is left alone. Hence it is important that we maintain our old friends. Another important reason to keep old friends is because by this we will know a lot more people. We will have a lot many people to talk to and help us. Once we get a job and settle down, it would be great to be in contact with all our old friends. Consider for instance, we have a problem regarding legal matters, then we have a friend from our school who is a lawyer so he may help us. Similarly our friends will help us in various ways in the future. It is also great to have reunions so that we can enjoy ourselves with our friends and know them better.
Finally, I feel that we should give equal importance to making new friends and keeping old friends. As we continue this process, we can build a network of friends who will help us in various stages of life. It will make our journey of life better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: anyone
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...we can share our problems with him/her. We need people whom we can physically meet...
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...hool who is a lawyer so he may help us. Similarly our friends will help us in various way...
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...an enjoy ourselves with our friends and know them better. Finally, I feel that we...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.176848874598 0.240241500013 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.17845659164 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0900321543408 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048231511254 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.12540192926 0.0444667217837 282% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107717041801 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0353697749196 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.23823749324 2.79330140395 80% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0305466237942 0.030933414821 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0032154340836 0.0016655270985 193% => OK
Determiners: 0.0755627009646 0.0997080785238 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0514469453376 0.0249443105267 206% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0096463022508 0.0148568991511 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3067.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 572.0 452.878318584 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36188811189 6.0361032391 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29020979021 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216783216783 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.104895104895 0.200843997647 52% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0506993006993 0.132149295362 38% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.23823749324 2.79330140395 80% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.396853146853 0.48968727796 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.7210055604 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6194690265 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4594594595 23.380412469 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1753579582 59.4972553346 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8918918919 141.124799967 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4594594595 23.380412469 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.459459459459 0.674092028746 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 37.1377811378 51.4728631049 72% => OK
Elegance: 0.908675799087 1.64882698954 55% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404170649629 0.391690518653 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133724383286 0.123202303941 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100499535436 0.077325440228 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.402027952957 0.547984918172 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137156333338 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146190886415 0.161403998019 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1065078644 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.482426102091 0.385218514788 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.110942461314 0.0692045440612 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351684560637 0.275328986314 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11907970036 0.0653680567796 182% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 10.4325221239 268% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 26.0 7.22455752212 360% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 33.0 13.5995575221 243% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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