Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate.
Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course.
Dear sir,
My name is Mohammed Aslam from India. I completed my bachelor of Electrical & Electronics engineering course on 2005 at Anna University. When I was in higher secondary school, I studied biology and mathematics as well.
Now I planned to do the tertiary course to strength my engineering course and at the same time, I will get more opportunity in the job market nowaday. The tertiary infomation course is very essential for my career and it will boost up my points to achieve my targets. I believe TAPE course will be very helpful to understand the basic fundamentals in an Electrical Engineer Trainee in power industry.
So I kindly request you to provide the valuable information about the Tertiary preparation certificate.
I will be very thankful for this help and please do favor in this regard.
Yours sincerely,
Mohammed Aslam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'fundamentals'.
Suggestion: fundamentals
... will be very helpful to understand the basic fundamentals in an Electrical Engineer Trainee in po...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.296774193548 0.220444632235 135% => OK
Verbs: 0.122580645161 0.167888034529 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0774193548387 0.0606518309736 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.058064516129 0.0506257000042 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0967741935484 0.118615021944 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0903225806452 0.107062808482 84% => OK
Participles: 0.00645161290323 0.041066498444 16% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.97187270513 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.0385302599488 84% => OK
Particles: 0.00645161290323 0.00132118243153 488% => OK
Determiners: 0.0645161290323 0.0714148451538 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0258064516129 0.0191574576366 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00645161290323 0.00930345855455 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 856.0 1141.60824742 75% => OK
No of words: 142.0 206.134020619 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02816901408 5.53046319177 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.78085437643 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387323943662 0.284621296913 136% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295774647887 0.211203875043 140% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218309859155 0.133321485273 164% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133802816901 0.0843313296314 159% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97187270513 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654929577465 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 60.474844623 62.8969750728 96% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 12.9587628866 69% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7777777778 16.4300151701 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6166142394 44.7399317507 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 90.9928171075 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 16.4300151701 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.613754768223 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 45.3552425665 37.5504026743 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.41860465116 1.13073093955 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349504300293 0.331212695627 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0752903792937 0.0927372745006 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0898561910061 0.0736520305886 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.673710026445 0.579516596996 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.214178327193 0.180689518051 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131618196928 0.122183219658 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141115968104 0.0765303033291 184% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.129955342972 0.211926503985 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0923220800413 0.0737400523855 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208109120731 0.203819188451 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157977315278 0.067151250289 235% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.