sports stars and movies stars have an obligation tovbehave as role models for the young people who look up to them.in retutn for the millions of dollars that they are paid,we should except them to fulfill this scoietal responsibility.
I am agree with this issue to the other said to movie start and sports start is a roal model of the million of the people.The million of the people is follow to the own roal model and it give to the dollars are paid for the role model.
These issue the first think ts people following to the your role model and it is any thing of the do work of the to give handred persent of the achive to the as follow to the your role model.people like as soprt person life style and his fitness and beheviour etc..so the people are following to the sport person like as virat kholi is marvelus player of the young crickter so people following virat and it paid so much dollars,to watch to the virat batting so people as suppoting to the soprt person.
The another think we talk about this issue movie stars the young people are mostly as a role model is one of movie stars and a young jonresin to costly paid to the watch to the movie and to give the dolloars.
young people must have followed to the indian superstar and it following are so unseen that.
The issue is so far in a reale life so we conculed that the young people is mosetly following to the sports stars and movie stars so i agrre with the other statetment .so some time is good to the young people
because fof some stars has achived to un excepted achivment and to the goal in own aem. so it good to the follow to the other person and we like to the succes to this person
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
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... said to movie start and sports start is a roal model of the million of the peopl...
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Suggestion: The
...roal model of the million of the people.The million of the people is follow to the...
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Suggestion:
... the people.The million of the people is follow to the own roal model and it give...
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Suggestion: followed
...he people.The million of the people is follow to the own roal model and it give to th...
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Suggestion: gives
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Suggestion: the; your
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Suggestion: many
...o people following virat and it paid so much dollars,to watch to the virat batting s...
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Suggestion: Young
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269230769231 0.240241500013 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.136363636364 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101398601399 0.0880659088768 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0384615384615 0.0497285424764 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041958041958 0.0444667217837 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0874125874126 0.12292977631 71% => OK
Participles: 0.034965034965 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.04535487729 2.79330140395 73% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0874125874126 0.030933414821 283% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.160839160839 0.0997080785238 161% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0034965034965 0.0249443105267 14% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0148568991511 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1436.0 2732.02544248 53% => OK
No of words: 279.0 452.878318584 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14695340502 6.0361032391 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.21146953405 0.366273622748 58% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.118279569892 0.280924506359 42% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0716845878136 0.200843997647 36% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0501792114695 0.132149295362 38% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.04535487729 2.79330140395 73% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 219.290929204 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390681003584 0.48968727796 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.4827104278 55.4138127331 66% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.5 23.380412469 199% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 140.467572375 59.4972553346 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.333333333 141.124799967 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.5 23.380412469 199% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 58.3279569892 51.4728631049 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.8064516129 1.64882698954 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417129506422 0.391690518653 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.36663372957 0.123202303941 298% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.122495057729 0.077325440228 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.938597940554 0.547984918172 171% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101314695638 0.149214159877 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.29783192277 0.161403998019 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491373948804 0.0892212321368 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.44845366313 0.385218514788 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.136559397001 0.0692045440612 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297774864425 0.275328986314 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477196386817 0.0653680567796 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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