Today, The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We lives in advertising world, in which any product can growing, because of advertising. Advertising is a fundamental of sales of products. Folk attract towards advertising, and sometimes purchase unnecessary things.
First of all, advertise plays vital role in the sales of goods. Advertising bring certain pros, from these, we can know about the products. Consumer goods depend on advertising. For an example, recently, tooth pest of max is more popular nowadays, people attract toward advertise and purchase it. So, advertising is a god of sales.
On the flip side, advertising may also have cons. Media express advertising in the positive way only. For an example, tobacco, “vimal” is the highest growing product in the tobacco. Advertise show only positive side of “vimal”, but it has more venom. Generally, folk believe in certain scheme, if, production company display a scheme such as, “Buy one get two free”, then people purchase that item. Actually, why we need that particular items?.
Albeit, folk generally prefer daily uses products. I would like to give you one example that, recently, Fair and lovely products gave a challenged of 5 crores rupees, if, any people beat fair and lovely with another cream, then firm will give 5 crores at a time. From that, advertising people purchase fair and lovely more and more, why we actually need?. So, advertising is the process, which can attract the people for purchase goods. So, folk have to purchase that things only, if, they need it.
To pen down, I would like to say that, advertising is the powerful system for sold out that product easy, but understanding of people can choose more appropriate product for fulfill our needs, rather than focus on advertising.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'We' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
We lives in advertising world, in which any prod...
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Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'brings'.
Suggestion: brings
...role in the sales of goods. Advertising bring certain pros, from these, we can know a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265927977839 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.108033240997 0.155533422707 69% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0747922437673 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0554016620499 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0332409972299 0.0437548338989 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108033240997 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0138504155125 0.0403226058552 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.88911830194 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.01108033241 0.0326793684256 34% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00554016620499 0.00163938923432 338% => OK
Determiners: 0.0692520775623 0.0861772015684 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0221606648199 0.021408717616 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138504155125 0.011925033212 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1759.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19366197183 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383802816901 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285211267606 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193661971831 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130281690141 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88911830194 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.6237944437 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.2 20.7743622355 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6036120433 49.517814964 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.95 127.492653851 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7743622355 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 42.7211267606 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.97183098592 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332445206126 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0967581316145 0.102741220458 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0827487104571 0.0668466124924 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468945760733 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180947510985 0.148594505496 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121280172907 0.134430193775 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876717936002 0.0742795772207 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.258231965276 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0878095062596 0.0638462369009 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214885735547 0.228012699653 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632648355251 0.058150111329 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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