Travelling
Travelling to various places are likely to be one of the best hobbies for every second individual of this world. There are array of factors that would continue to influence the rate of travelling not only in this century but also for every coming century. Travelling business will continue to grow by outweighing the restricting factors of decaying in norm.
To start with, people travel for many reasons. For instance, to get relaxation from routine, to satisfy the thirst of the knowledge, to expand business overseas, and so on. These reasons never going to be eliminate from the human life. So, it keeps motivating people to travel.
Moreover, technology and liberalization has opened a door of many sources of expedition within and across the boundaries. Reduction in airfares, due to internal competition of aviation companies and liberalization in rules of visa issuance has increased interest of people in travelling more. Globalization offered a vast connectivity through different mode of commutation via road , air and water . These all factors are great fuel in flourishing travel industry around the world.
On the contrary, there are few restrictions which may refrain the people to travel in some part of the world. Safety and security are the main reasons which can restrict people to travel those parts of the world where people have threat to their life. For instance, The state of Kashmir in India. Once upon a time , Kashmir was known as a heaven on the earth which get reduction in its tourist income due to terrorism.
By summing up all the above arguments, I can strongly believe that besides fewer hindrance like terrorism , travel industry will continue to prosper in future .
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Essay evaluation report
Travelling to various places are likely
Travelling to various places is likely
These reasons never going to be eliminate from the human life.
These reasons are never going to be eliminated from the human life.
technology and liberalization has opened
technology and liberalization have opened
Kashmir was known as a heaven on the earth which get reduction in its tourist income due to terrorism.
Kashmir was known as a heaven on the earth which gets reductions in its tourist income due to terrorism.
flaws:
1. Need a complete essay topic.
2. No. of Words: 279 350 //need more content
3. No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 279 350
No. of Characters: 1384 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.087 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.961 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.71 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.438 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.354 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.562 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Travelling to various places are likely to be one of the best hobbies...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'arrays'?
Suggestion: arrays
...ond individual of this world. There are array of factors that would continue to influ...
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Line 4, column 382, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h different mode of commutation via road , air and water . These all factors are g...
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Line 4, column 398, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of commutation via road , air and water . These all factors are great fuel in flo...
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Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...te of Kashmir in India. Once upon a time , Kashmir was known as a heaven on the ea...
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Line 6, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shmir was known as a heaven on the earth which get reduction in its tourist incom...
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Line 8, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t besides fewer hindrance like terrorism , travel industry will continue to prospe...
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Line 8, column 150, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ravel industry will continue to prosper in future .
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Line 8, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ustry will continue to prosper in future .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'on the contrary', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26213592233 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.148867313916 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0744336569579 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0323624595469 0.0501214627716 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0129449838188 0.0437548338989 30% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.152103559871 0.122226691241 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0453074433657 0.0403226058552 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79327237508 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0517799352751 0.0326793684256 158% => OK
Particles: 0.00323624595469 0.00163938923432 197% => OK
Determiners: 0.0938511326861 0.0861772015684 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194174757282 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0161812297735 0.011925033212 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1712.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02816901408 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37676056338 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271126760563 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197183098592 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133802816901 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79327237508 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.5641549636 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.75 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4507208426 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.8626760563 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 2.36666666667 1.69124875643 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0795459349212 0.332605444948 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119195517259 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0897996643182 0.0668466124924 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606865142193 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162212295756 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365366976302 0.134430193775 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645670293206 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.238499822936 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0634877633578 0.0638462369009 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522661790402 0.228012699653 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770831777726 0.058150111329 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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