Before making a decision it is important to find out if the decision will be popular with others
A person should make certain important decisions in different stages of life. He should have an experience and mature enough to assess the strength and weaknesses of the decision, which he makes. I strongly believe that a person should always take an advice or suggestion from elders, experienced people in order to avoid adverse consequences.
First of all, youngsters when they are choosing academic courses for the graduation, they should consult parents and academic advisors in the university. Because advisors are well experienced and they meant to be in the college to help and guide the students that which courses are suitable for them. Advisors usually do counseling and give them the appropriate suggestions depending upon the student’s interest and marks scored in the under graduation. As a result, the student can succeed in their academic career without much difficulty.
Secondly, students often get confused to make a proper decision in their career choice, because they are not mature enough to decide which field to opt for. Career advisors are there to advice them to take an important decision that which career is suitable for students. For instance, when I completed my under graduation, I was bit confused which courses I should choose for my graduation. I consulted my teacher for the advice. She meticulously assessed my strength and weaknesses while talking with me. Then she guided me to choose biology as my major subject. Because of her appropriate suggestion, I decided to take biology as my major. As a result, I became a successful doctor today. Still, I remember her valuable advice.
Finally, even after graduation and career choice, we need the advice to take crucial decisions in different situations, which includes investing a huge amount of money on businesses or buying some properties, relocation, personal matters like marriage and relationships and so on. In these situations, we need to take a proper advice from respective expertise like legal advisors, friends, family members and well-wishers. As a result, they will give proper suggestions for our decision that whether it is good or bad. Then we can rethink about our decision before taking huge risks. Without a proper plan and advice, if we make a decision, then we might face the adverse consequences of failure in business or relationship. Even though nowadays people are very smart, independent in thinking and capable enough to take their own decision but, because of immaturity and loss of experience they may end up in failures.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that while making an important decision we should take the advice from elders and experienced people to avoid the failures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
... I completed my under graduation, I was bit confused which courses I should choose ...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'proper advice'.
Suggestion: proper advice
...n. In these situations, we need to take a proper advice from respective expertise like legal ad...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224948875256 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.137014314928 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0858895705521 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0449897750511 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0899795501022 0.0685040099705 131% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128834355828 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0245398773006 0.0351676179071 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87106405285 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0306748466258 0.0309702414327 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00204498977505 0.00188951952338 108% => OK
Determiners: 0.0674846625767 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224948875256 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0184049079755 0.0139019557991 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2706.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 436.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20642201835 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.438073394495 0.338922669872 129% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314220183486 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220183486239 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135321100917 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87106405285 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493119266055 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.2285220219 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9565217391 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6718715141 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.652173913 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9565217391 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.695652173913 0.644075263715 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 50.3785400878 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.39097744361 1.45489161554 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20742624878 0.300154397459 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147955348783 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100141922536 0.0752933317313 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476142868312 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188070684715 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700112039923 0.114077575197 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567476220503 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.265287586289 0.336927656856 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.020710822964 0.067059652881 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136484672846 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334340603375 0.0618886996521 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.